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« on: October 22, 2006, 07:53:55 PM »
Hi there, I have just finished my first H-L 2 map and would like to share it with you folks. I'll show you guys some screenshots to start with and then give you the download links. Here is some eye candy Smiley







And you can download it here:

www.freefilehost.co.uk/678658

or here:

www.t3rbo.com/file.php?file=b3a2580f7dfecfdf0a51604e4c15eb1d

If you want to read more about this map, go here: http://www.snarkpit.net/maps.php?map=2738
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« Reply #1 on: October 22, 2006, 11:26:37 PM »
Looks worth a try!
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« Reply #2 on: October 22, 2006, 11:35:12 PM »
Way to plain! add some prop_physics and shit...
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« Reply #3 on: October 23, 2006, 12:03:57 AM »
Yeah I'll bear that in mind. Meanwhile, fancy giving it a try?
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« Reply #4 on: October 23, 2006, 01:54:13 AM »
Crap...sorry to say but it is...

Everything is to big (try using dev textures when starting out)
You meet Strong Enemies way to fast
You get your guns way to fast....
Needs a story...
Needs better design...
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« Reply #5 on: October 23, 2006, 07:06:03 AM »
Judging from the screenshots, it looks pretty nice. I like the textures you used. Although some looks like it could do with some re-aligning.

Most of it looks a little, for lack of a better term, "blocky." It looks as if everything is made of perfect rectangles and the like. The ceiling of the tunnel in screenshot two should be lowered and the tunnel itself rounded into more of an arc. It looks also as if the track next to the train leads right into the wall.

And to quote Frostbite, it needs some props and other minor details.
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« Reply #6 on: October 23, 2006, 10:26:17 AM »
Okay thanks, I'll bear that in mind!
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« Reply #7 on: October 30, 2006, 11:10:19 PM »
Way better than my first try, though I wouldn't say it's that good either, continue mapping, you have twice my potential atleast!
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« Reply #8 on: October 31, 2006, 10:05:43 PM »
Quote from: Flynn on October 23, 2006, 10:26:17 AM
Okay thanks, I'll bear that in mind!

That's just some disused railway track Tongue
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